I gaze above into the black lit sky laying on the creamy silky wool blanket
The word "imagine" appears in my mind
Wandering if this is it, the time I will see the first shooting star
Hope fills my body and anxiousness awaits
The Big Dipper is staring down at me trying to calm my soul
Noise is ruffling through the trees as the wind picks up bit by bit
Shocking to hear the fright comes along
Quickly turning the other direction I panic
However, I see the bright bold moon perfectly placed above the trees
The feeling of repose shakes over my body and I feel chills
Not chills of trepidity but the chills of peace
My eyes are dozing and I am about to fall asleep
Happiness swooshes over my body and the night is over
This poem brings up a scene of serenity and innocence pointing out how amazing the star lit night can be. You had great vocabulary choices along with an good title. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteWow Makenzie this was really good!! You really gave the reader something to picture while reading this...great word choice!!! Great job!! :)
ReplyDeleteNice job Kenzie! I really like it, it has good word choice and you can imagine what you are describing. :)
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this piece, the description was so detailed! In addition to that, your voice was amazing in this.
ReplyDeleteGood job(: