When I gaze into your deep eyes I get lost
As I step into your arms my body fills with butterflies
I see you smile, and my body fills with warmth
I look into the glowing stars above me, and think about you each night
You engage me in a conversation and look into my eyes
I am not close to perfect, but you tell me I am everyday
Though, I may not have you for an eternity, I sure hope I do
You tell me you love me but I cant fathom the words
I want to say it back but it just wont come out
But now, the words are here and I can finally say...
I love you
I love it!!! I've never had love haha but that seems like everything you said would happen. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteNice job on that piece! I think you did a great on showing how love happens. I loved reading this piece
ReplyDeleteI love this... this had me hooked in the first stanza. This is amazing you have great detail and emotion in this piece.. I will love this piece forever
ReplyDeleteMackenzie! I absolutely am in love with this piece. It was almost as if I was living it. It gave me goosebumps reading it. My favorite line of this poem and now one of my favorite quotes is 'I look at the glowing stars above me, and think about you each night', I know how that feels. Great Job! Very Cool!
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